The Present by Patrick Khayler
My rating: 5 of 5 stars
This book made me late for after school care pick up because I sat in the car finishing it! It is unbelievably hot, from the beginning to the very last page. It is my favorite kind of erotica- totally possible under implausible circumstances. Khayler adds authenticity by weaving the mundane of daily family life and work with fantasy, memories of past sexual escapades, and the anticipation of a hot, hot night.
The underlying love story of two people wrapped up in real life--kids,
jobs, responsibilities--sang through the heat of the crazy menage sex.
Throughout the book, you get a sense that the author is writing from
experience. In the early chapters, he details the awkward beauty of the
couple's first time together. It was like a look into a real past that
blossomed into a happy lifetime, seasoned with hot fantasies.
The narrative was bulky in spots, but the sex was so hot, it didn't matter. Khayler's writing is slick and easy to read.
If you are in the mood for wet panties, read this book.
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